Sorry, but there are a lot of things unattractive about the finished image. Even though its cartony and stylized the anatomy is bothersome to the eye, the angle of the head is off, and the hair is lost of all physics. I don't want to list all the things wrong, but it just doesn't seem like its a strong enough piece for people to want to see the process of how it was made. Let alone, Newgrounds isn't a place for screen captures. This is perfect for the art portal, but not as a movie.